How Blackpink Should Have Sung 'Pink Venom'

[LostInTheDream]

I'm not a big fan of the song but I think the person who distributed the lines made some serious mistakes. I mean the song kinda feels like a Jennie and Lisa unit song with Rose and Jisoo featuring.
Here is my distribution (which is also much fairer) and an explanation below it:

Kick in the door, waving the coco Jennie
Papkonina chaenggyeo kkyeodeul saenggak malgo Jennie
I talk that talk, runways I walk walk Jennie
Nun gamkko pop pop an bwado cheok Jennie

One by one then two by two Lisa
Nae sonkkeut tuk hanae da muneojineun jung Lisa
Gatja sho chigon hwaryeohaetji Lisa
Makes no sense, you couldn't get a dollar outta me Lisa

Ja oneul bamiya Rose
Nan dogeul pumeun kkot Rose
Ni honeul ppaeaseun daeum Rose
Look what you made us do Rose
Cheoncheonhi neol jamjaeul Fire Jisoo
Janinhal mankeum areumdaweo Jisoo
I bring the pain like Rose

This that pink venom Jennie
This that pink venom Jennie
This that pink venom Jennie
Get 'em, get 'em, get 'em Lisa
Straight to ya dome Jennie
like whoa whoa whoa Jennie and Rose orig Jennie
Straight to ya dome Jennie
like ah ah ah Jennie and Rose orig Jennie

Taste that pink venom Lisa
Taste that pink venom Lisa
Taste that pink venom Lisa
Get 'em, get 'em, get 'em Jennie
Straight to ya dome Lisa
like whoa whoa whoa Lisa and Jisoo orig Lisa
Straight to ya dome Lisa
like ah ah ah Lisa and Jisoo orig Lisa

Black paint and ammo, got bodies like Rambo Lisa
Rest in peace, please light up a candle Lisa
This da life of a vandal, masked up and I'm still in Celine Lisa
Designer crimes or it wouldn't be me Lisa

Diamonds shinin' drive in silence Jennie
I don't mind it I'm ridin' Jennie
Flyin' private side by side with da pilot up in the sky Jennie
And I'm wildin', stylin' on them and there's no chance Jennie
Cuz we got bodies on bodies like this a slow dance Jennie

Ja oneul bamiya Jisoo
Nan dogeul pumeun kkot Jisoo
Ni honeul ppaeaseun daeum Jisoo
Look what you made us do Jisoo
Cheoncheonhi neol jamjaeul Fire Rose
Janinhal mankeum areumdaweo Rose
I bring the pain like Jisoo

This that pink venom Lisa
This that pink venom Lisa
This that pink venom Lisa
Get 'em, get 'em, get 'em Jennie
Straight to ya dome Lisa
like whoa whoa whoa Lisa and Jisoo orig Lisa
Straight to ya dome Lisa
like ah ah ah Lisa and Lisa and Jisoo orig Lisa

Taste that pink venom Rose orig Jennie
Taste that pink venom Rose orig Jennie
Taste that pink venom Rose orig Jennie
Get 'em, get 'em, get 'em Lisa
Straight to ya dome Rose orig Jennie
like whoa whoa whoa Rose and Jennie orig Jennie
Straight to ya dome Rose orig Jennie
like ah ah ah Rose and Rose and Jennie orig Jennie

Weonhandamyeon Provoke us Rose
Gamdang motae And you know this Rose
Imi peojeobeorin Shot that potion Jisoo
Ni nunapeun pingkeubit Ocean Jisoo

Come and give me all the smoke Rose
Do animyeon mo Like I'm so rock and roll Rose
Come and give me all the smoke Jisoo
Da jul seweo bwa ja Stop drop Jisoo

I bring the pain like Lisa

Ratatata ratatata Jisoo and Lisa orig Jennie and Lisa
Ratatata ratatata Jisoo and Lisa orig Jennie and Lisa
Ratatata ratatata Jisoo and Lisa orig Jennie and Lisa
Straight to ya Lisa
Straight to ya Lisa
Straight to ya dome like Lisa

Ratatata ratatata Rose and Jennie orig Jennie and Lisa
Ratatata ratatata Rose and Jennie orig Jennie and Lisa
Ratatata ratatata Rose and Jennie orig Jennie and Lisa
I bring the pain like Jennie

The Choruses
The first change I made was to have 2 members sing the "Like woah woah woah" and "Like ah ah ah" parts. In the lyric videos it has the whole group doing it, but I think making it just two members makesit sound less clinical. It makes the song feel more like Blackpink and less individualistic. This line sharing is similar to in HYLT and it works really well. I paired Lisa and Jisoo together because the light and dark contrast in their voice works well. The same with Jennie and Rose. Jennie's voice is more husky/raspy compared to Rose's light and almost fragile tone. They also soung so good singing the second part of the chorus in Lovesick Girls.

The 2nd Chorus
I thinkdue to Jennie's approach in the chorus being softer and more subdued isn't a good match for the second chorus. Going after Lisa, who uses a bright and almost girly tone, makes the chorus fall almost flat. It feels like something is missing. I think Rose can really excellently match this brightness. Besides, this chorus part has her name written all over it. I'm really surprised she wasn't given it originally.

The Final Chorus
I think that it would make the song more unique if the 'ratatata' part wasn't just sung by the rap line. By using the same combonations you could get some really cool sounds that aren't super uniform. Anyways, the combo of Jennie and Lisa sounds very similar to Jisoo, so she should have the chance to sing it. It also makes the line distribution and center distribution a lot fairer.

Line Distribution
Jisoo: 42.884 sec (orig 26.940 sec)
Jennie: 43.399 sec (orig 56.580 sec)
Rose: 49.345 sec (orig 29.11 sec)
Lisa: 52.502 sec (orig 50.470 sec)


What are your thoughts on this distribution?

 

[sanasideup]

literal perfection. ik it's a rap focused song, but honestly so is hylt, but hylt has a much better line distribution. this one is a lot fairer, and lisa (who i think suits pink venom the most) has the most lines